Summer vacation
My summer vacation trip
This summer i went to Blue Mountain twice to go downhill mountain biking. It is about a two hour drive to get there but it is totally worth it, It is located in Collingwood. Whenever I go there i have a blast it so much fun. To get to the top you have to take the gondola up and near the top you get a breathtaking view of Wasaga beach, the beautiful blue water is just amazing as it glistens across the sky and when you get to the top you have to bike a little bit to get to some of the trails but it is totally worth it because as you you ride down its the best feeling ever the wind blowing in your face, the sick air you get of rock drops and the suspension soaking up every little bump which makes you feel like your your landing in the fluffiest of clouds and just sinking through all the way down. On the way down there is lots of jumps and bridges and its so much fun do shred them so hard but when you get to the bottom its not a good feeling because the trail just ended but you still get to ride all day. My favourite trail is either minions or embryo, minions has lots of jumps but is not that technical and embryo has a couple of drops and it is very technical with lots of rocks and roots but it is still so much fun and exhiliarating. But then there are the black diamond trails which they all look awesome and so much fun but i am not ready for those trails yet but I hope to tackle them next year when i have the season pass and can go a lot more and practice so my dreams of me becoming a professional DH racer come true but anyway we are getting a little off topic lets get back to my summer vacation. By the end of the day you litterally going to feel like jello your'e whole body is going to ache but it is totallly worth it. After we went to the village to eat some food and that was my best memory for summer vacation.
BY: Dominic
This summer i went to Blue Mountain twice to go downhill mountain biking. It is about a two hour drive to get there but it is totally worth it, It is located in Collingwood. Whenever I go there i have a blast it so much fun. To get to the top you have to take the gondola up and near the top you get a breathtaking view of Wasaga beach, the beautiful blue water is just amazing as it glistens across the sky and when you get to the top you have to bike a little bit to get to some of the trails but it is totally worth it because as you you ride down its the best feeling ever the wind blowing in your face, the sick air you get of rock drops and the suspension soaking up every little bump which makes you feel like your your landing in the fluffiest of clouds and just sinking through all the way down. On the way down there is lots of jumps and bridges and its so much fun do shred them so hard but when you get to the bottom its not a good feeling because the trail just ended but you still get to ride all day. My favourite trail is either minions or embryo, minions has lots of jumps but is not that technical and embryo has a couple of drops and it is very technical with lots of rocks and roots but it is still so much fun and exhiliarating. But then there are the black diamond trails which they all look awesome and so much fun but i am not ready for those trails yet but I hope to tackle them next year when i have the season pass and can go a lot more and practice so my dreams of me becoming a professional DH racer come true but anyway we are getting a little off topic lets get back to my summer vacation. By the end of the day you litterally going to feel like jello your'e whole body is going to ache but it is totallly worth it. After we went to the village to eat some food and that was my best memory for summer vacation.
BY: Dominic
You did great Dom! I think that you should make your "i's" capitals and maybe explain a little more like for example what food did you eat. But otherwise it is great. I specifically liked how you used descriptive words and made it feel like you're really there.
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